Thoughts on my story

So, in the Write, Write, and Write Chat, I was talking to one about my story. Yes, I know where I want to go with it, but I'm not sure how to get there.

This is what we figured up.

•In the past [perhaps a different plantet]
•The "elders" chose him
•It's a secret society
•The society is failing
•If Ryan can convince people, then they can take the "journey" and convince others
•He's basically a time traveller


And there's also a thought I've had running through my mind :

•HE is the secret society. Which is why he's the only one that knows how to get there. Like...I'm not sure how it'd work out heh.

*If you've eer watched Inuyasha and saw the episode where the went to his father's grave from the marble in the eye....kind of like that. :/

But this story is really calling out to me and I know I want to write it. I just want to have everything sorted out so it's a smooth ride.

Any questions/comments?